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December 29, 2011
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Sun's Fire Part 3 by MisterAibo Sun's Fire Part 3 by MisterAibo
Part 3 out of 3. Because dA doesn't like large things.
Making this took forever and I think it could use some more work.
Any input is highly appreciated.

1st page
2nd page
3rd page

Music: [link]
Time taken: 30 hours? I dunno, forever.

A actual song is currently in production. I will post the link when it's done.

Now translated to LA Spanish! Fuego del Sol
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I'm not an artist, perse, except with words. But I'd like to try this out anyway.

Let me just say that the art is very, very well done.

I read this twice. The first time without the music, the second time with. Let's start with no music. Since I have NO recollection of the movie in question, the actual wording made little to no sense. Without music and a source, I could figure out that obviously Celestia and Discord has this love affair but he turned evil and she had no choice to stop him. Make sense, except the wording was kind of... weird.

So I went back and listened a long. The music both adds to and takes away from this piece. Obviously, I got some context through the song, so that was a good thing. I liked that you changed the lyrics to fit the Equestria setting, but it almost seemed as if you had to change them a little too much. So following along is great if someone isn't quite sure of what exactly is going on (as was with me).

I think, though, the music could be sort of a source for you and you could make this into your own thing. Taking the idea that Discord and Celestia were once in love and she had to stop him, that could have held well enough on it's own merits.

Overall, I think this is really well done. I guess I just think that perhaps it would have added to it had you told your own story. And it wouldn't have to be terribly far from the music you chose, but rather just using that as a springboard for something else. Don't misunderstand me though, I love this idea. I love the concept of Discord and Celestia in general.

Again, this was great, but it could have been a bit better with your own thoughts entwined within the story instead of rehashed lyrics.
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McConnell48 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Daaaang! I was reading along to the music and wow! That was magnificent! Beautiful! 
UltimateView Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOLY CRAP! i saw the 3 parts with the music hellfire.I was awesome,incredible.
NewNumber2 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Would U B cool with me singing this on YouTube some day?
Fleetway-Sonic Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Aw. That's so.... *cries like a baby*
Fantasygerard2000 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Artist
OMG this is like the real story of celestia and discord
wWerefoXx Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i was thinking that the position of his statue looked like he was serenading someone o.o
glad I'm not the only one who thinks so :D
Rafarofa Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
okay, I just did read the 3 parts while listening to hellfire. I think the astonishment will be gone by tomorrow (and it's already past midnight of november 9th where I live )
SkullCroos Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pufff ... the music doesn´t suit the story
this music does [link][link]

The burned love of a love that you cannot have...
beutiful in everyways, and when he came back...
he burn it all, knowing that he had nothing to lose not even his life.
KitchenPrincess Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I agree that song is good with it. But I like both songs
Victoria-Firewriath Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
-slowly's claps- that was wonderful
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