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Sun's Fire Part 1 by MisterAibo Sun's Fire Part 1 by MisterAibo
Part 1 out of 3. Because dA doesn't like large things.
Making this took forever and I think it could use some more work.
Any input is highly appreciated.

1st page
2nd page
3rd page

Music: [link]
Time taken: 30 hours? I dunno, forever.

Now translated to LA Spanish! Fuego del Sol
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:iconthejboy88:
Ever since I was a young child, I've been a fan of Disney'd Hunchback of Notre Dame. The dark imagery, the risuqe themes, the complex characters. I twas easily as dark as Disney ever got. As such there's an element to thic comic/picture that I cannot help but like, even if it's only because it connects to something else I love.

But if that was all I said about this piece, I'd be doing it a great disservice. Because even if it didn't have that element to it, it's still a good work of art. The colours compliment the emotions that go into a song such as this, dark, brooding, almost cold. The coloured outlines of the two princesses work particularly well, mostly because it gives the impression of the two characters speaking in secret, in the shadows, which I think was the intent.

The overall art style is very reminiscent of the show itself, which is always very impressive to pull off. The stained-glass window in particular manages to both provide another connection to the film it's based on, and to tie it in with imagery the show itself has given us in the past.

In terms of originality I can honestly say that I have seen few attempts to try and adapt a song like this into a MLP comic. So it gets high marks for originality. But the effort that's clearly gone into it, the skill taken to create something so like the style of the show, even the emotions coming from a malevolant character like Discord. These are qualities which must not be overlooked.

Overall this is a very impressive piece, even if it is only the first page of this comic series. I look forward to seeing what the artist does in future installments.
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NewNumber2 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014

I freakin' LOVE this piece!


The lyrics are clever, the shots are dramatic, the lighting and style are all GLORIOUS!


INSTANT FAVE FROM ME, GOOD SIR!!!

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Nintendogamemaster Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Someone had a similar idea than you [link]
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:iconmisteraibo:
MisterAibo Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
In the description. Thank you.
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:iconnintendogamemaster:
Nintendogamemaster Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
You are welcome, I can believe Im the first one to make a translation of this to other language.
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Nintendogamemaster Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Can I translate this to latin american spanish?
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:iconmisteraibo:
MisterAibo Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Sure. However, I'd recommend making the same kind of "parody" from scratch, only use the same frames.
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Nintendogamemaster Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
I wasnt planing on drawing, I was planning just writting in a message how it would be in LA spanish.
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MisterAibo Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Nobody's stopping you from doing that either, but changing the text bubbles instead would probably yield more viewers.
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Nintendogamemaster Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
(Part 1 finished)
Luna: Pero, no puedes. Tú lo amas.
Celestia: Si, pero...tiene que ser detenido

Discord: Querida Celestia, tu sabes que perfecto no soy, de mi locura no hay duda.
Discord: Querida Celestia, tu sabes que estoy hambriento, de lo único que no me puedo permitir.
Discord: Entonces Celestia, porque te veo parada ahí, con tus ojos que como llamas son.
Discord: Te veo, te quiero. En mi pelo siento tu sol, de lado a lado sin control.
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MisterAibo Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Could you make the translation a separate deviation when you're done? I'd link it in the description.
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Nintendogamemaster Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Okay.
(Part 2)
Discord: Es Fuego, de el sol, que penetra mi alma. Un puro, deseo, que me incompleta.
Discord: Mi culpa no es, si me embrujo. Fue la alicornio quien la llama encendió
Discord: Mi culpa no es, si esta en mi plan, ignorando el hecho de solo ser inmortal.
Discord: Disculpa Celestia, no me dejes este hechizo poner, sino mi caos reinara.
Discord: Te amo Celestia, como el fuego del sol. Y por favor se mia y mia seras.
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lazynerd Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
I just want to let you know that after seeing it for the first time when it was posted on EqD, I loved this to death. Now, almost half a year later, I'm scrambling trying to find this again because I was stupid enough to not favorite it. I think it's that good. If that song is still being produced I hope it comes out soon.
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MisterAibo Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
The song is already made. It isn't terribly good, I'm afraid. I don't have a link any more, but I guess you can find it on youtube.
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AnimalLover12411 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! but you forgot discord's wings... or was that on purpose?
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MisterAibo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
They never looked good on the silhouette.
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AnimalLover12411 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh, that makes sense :D
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sistemx Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
ROFL
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melodytungtung Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Student Artist
OMG! The comic suits the music so perfectly!!! I love it!!!
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DrillBoysGirl Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
I love it!
The artwork is fantastic, and the story flows beautifully with/without the music!
AWESOME!!
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ngageman Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
Sniff... two things i love discord + hellfire. I would kiss ya man.
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bronyXD Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is a very nice peice of art
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martinds1 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
where is his wings
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shikanara37 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
VERBO ET OPERE
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silentsteel Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
The very concept of this is sending shivers down my spine.
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IckleVoldiePoo Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
I love this! On to page 2!

(Are Discord's wings left off intentionally?)
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:iconmisteraibo:
MisterAibo Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Yes. It broke the outline.
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SonicRatchet Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I nostalgia'd a bit after playing that song. After it wore off and I went through the comic while listening to the song, it was great! The song really complimented the comic! Your comic's well made, and you chose a great song to go with it :)!
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4LLJ00R84536UY Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
I've started seeing more subtle Diselestia lately and it's hard to tell whether or not it should be welcomed or warded...
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Rowan193 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Lyrics suggestions for this page (I doubt you can edit these, but whatever)

- Discord isn't a man. Of course, "draconequus" wouldn't fit handily into that line, since it swaps a one-syllable word for a big meaty four-syllable. I'd suggest "...thing", the ellipsis representing a little pause that can just about fit in the line to imply Discord himself is struggling with "draconequus", and then settling for "thing" is easily in-character for him.
- For correct grammar while keeping the rhythm, you can swap out the "only" in "the only thing in world I'm not allowed" and put in "one", so you have room for a "the" where you need it.
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CartoonNinja Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
You recommend music, and yet I hear it perfectly in my head, complete with John de Lancie instead of Tony Jay. Kudos for invoking a forgotten song in my memories.
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templar127 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011
Discord's such a drama queen! LOL!
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LunarLotis Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
SO COOL >w<
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Lenyntaka Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
you forgot to put wings on discord .-.
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:iconmisteraibo:
MisterAibo Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
I know, but the outline never looked good with them, so I just omitted them.
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Lenyntaka Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
i see..
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UnicornButtCupcake Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I read it with the background music as you told me to ...

[link]

the vid i heard with this! :D :P
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Tifa-the-Strange Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
THIS


IS


GENIUS!!!!

Mixing one of my all time favorite Disney Villain songs with Discord and ponies... You, madam/sir, are a freaking GOD!!!! :worship:
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MisterAibo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
Thank you.
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Bat-Snake Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh ho, this is just brilliant after all the "Heaven's Light" stuff :iconmegusta: . Both work brilliant, especially with the transition.
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MisterAibo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
Actually, I had an idea for Heaven's Light, but this came sooner and did it better.
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