You might ask: "Why do you still record at home?" Surely I could afford renting - if not owning - a recording room. Of course I could. But there is something about a nice, homey room. The warmth of sun, the soft smell of wood and books, the feeling this is where I belong. Even though it was a pain to get the acoustics right.
--- Commission Made for *Night-Ferocity. She wanted a cinmeagraph of her OC Melody Breeze singing in a recording room.
--- Technical Five iterations, animated since the first (did background the last). Major change to the images composition in the last one.
The mouth proved interesting. I'm working on a script that will help me accelerate mouth-creating process.
--- Links The original SVG can be found here: [link]
Hello! First of all everything about this picture works really well. You have her in an interesting spot, with a good background. You really did well with the vectors! The animation loops nicely and really adds to the overall feel of the image. The subtle animation of the record (the needle bobbing up and down especially!) really shows your attention to detail. Her hair moving goes along with the body moving, and looks realistic. The frame with the little gold plates adds to it as well, and reminds me of the pictures in Harry Potter.
The only error I see is a little black glitch at the tip of her hair, between the headphones and the base of it.
This is really inventive and innovative, and has become one of my favorite pieces of OC work. GREAT JOB!
First of all everything about this picture works really well. You have her in an interesting spot, with a good background. You really did well with the vectors! The animation loops nicely and really adds to the overall feel of the image. The subtle animation of the record (the needle bobbing up and down especially!) really shows your attention to detail. Her hair moving goes along with the body moving, and looks realistic. The frame with the little gold plates adds to it as well, and reminds me of the pictures in Harry Potter.
The only error I see is a little black glitch at the tip of her hair, between the headphones and the base of it.
This is really inventive and innovative, and has become one of my favorite pieces of OC work. GREAT JOB!
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